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問:中学校第三学年の英語の授業で、「あなたの身の回りにある便利なものを紹介しよう」の単元を導入する。その単元の最初にsmall talkをするとき、あなたが生徒に聞かせる英語を書きなさい。
条件(1) have toを使うこと。
条件(2) 100語程度の英語で書くこと。

What is useful things around you?
In my case, it is "car" for two reasons.

Firstly, it enables me to move much faster than walking.
For example, it takes about forty minutes from my home to here by car.
But it would take more than three hours if I walk same distance!

Secondly, it make it possible for me to move door to door.
I mean that I don't have to walk if I use it.
But If I use public transportation, I have to walk to the station.

These reasons I said car is useful things for me!
What is useful things for you?

訳:あのたの身の回りにある便利なものは何ですか。
私の場合、それは二つの理由により車です。

一つ目は、徒歩よりもかなり早く移動できることです。
例えば、私の家からここまで車で約40分程です。しかし、同じ距離を歩くと3時間以上かかるでしょう。

二つ目は、ドアトウドアの移動が可能だということです。
つまりそれを使うと歩く必要がないということです。
しかし、公共交通機関を使うと駅まで歩かなければいけません。

私の言ったこれらの理由により、車は私にとっての便利なものです。
あなたにとって便利なものは何ですか。

投稿日時 - 2017-03-20 21:42:44

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>What is useful things around you?
まず、things(複数)を使うなら is → are です。しかしこの文体は違和感があるので、
What useful things [are there] around you? の方がよいでしょう。

>In my case, it is [a] "car" for two reasons.
>Firstly, it enables me to move much faster than walking.
そのままで良いと思います。

>For example, it takes about forty minutes from my home to here by car.
「車ならたったの40分で」と強調するために、"only" を入れると良いと思います。
For example, it [only] takes about forty minutes from my home to here by car.

>But it would take more than three hours if I walk same distance!
But it would take more than t[h]ree hours if I [walked] [the] same distance!

>Secondly, it make it possible for me to move door to door.
Secondly, [a car] make[s] it possible for me to move [from] door-to-door.

>I mean that I don't have to walk if I use it.
[What] I mean [is] that I don't have to walk [using a car.]

>But If I use public transportation, I have to walk to the station.
But [using] public transportation, I [would] have to walk to the station.

>These reasons I said car is useful things for me!
[For] these reasons, I [think that] [for me] [a] [car] is a useful.

>What is useful things for you?
What [are] useful for you?
============================================
What useful things [are there] around you?
In my case, it is [a] "car" for two reasons.
Firstly, it enables me to move much faster than walking.
For example, it [only] takes about forty minutes from my home to here by car.
But it would take more than t[h]ree hours if I [walked] [the] same distance!
Secondly, [a car] make[s] it possible for me to move [from] door-to-door.
[What] I mean [is] that I don't have to walk [using a car.]
But [using] public transportation, I [would] have to walk to the station.
[For] these reasons, I [think that] [for me] [a] [car] is a useful.
What things [are] useful for you?

投稿日時 - 2017-03-20 23:11:53

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ご丁寧にご教授頂きありがとうございます。
一つ一つ確認の上自分のものにさせて頂きます。

投稿日時 - 2017-03-23 14:34:53

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